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Wednesday, October 20, 2010

Spark: Evoution Chapter 33 Excerpt

I'm very pleased to post a selection from Spark: Evolution. I'm not a professional editor so even though I've read went over this part many many times some errors may still exist.
 
The Scene: Laura, Yang (one of The Five, the leaders of The Institution) and her good friend Ginger (yes, from Step One Two) are on a mission to Laura's hometown. I'm sure that what is happening might not be 100% understood due to it being at the end'ish part of the book. Either way, enjoy!
 
Yang leaned into the front seat and pointed. “Right here. Pull into that driveway.” Ginger did as she was told and parked.
Laura looked at the house and at the area they were in. It was sort of familiar, but she wasn’t sure. It had been a long time since she had been here. The house was just like all the others in Lastville. Wind beaten and old looking on the outside.
Someone pushed aside the curtain and peaked out at them. When they noticed they were seen, they quickly moved away from the window.